Impossible Love
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Impossible Love
Impossible Love
Maybe there is no tomorrow
only now perhaps
Neither you or me have the time
but the desire
always awaiting as set in fire
hours ending again
Maybe there is no tomorrow
only now perhaps
Neither you or me have the time
but the desire
always awaiting as set in fire
hours ending again
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Re: Impossible Love
Nice first poem. I like how you play with time/hours/now/no tomorrow. Makes it all seem almost stolen love.
I wouldn't mind a stanza or two more, but brevity has its place. Welcome to the Block.
I wouldn't mind a stanza or two more, but brevity has its place. Welcome to the Block.
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Re: Impossible Love
Welcome to the Writer's Block.
Neat poem.
Neat poem.
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Re: Impossible Love
I appreciate your comments. I am so honored to be part of this group; I look forward to contributing to it as well as to be enriched by your work.
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Re: Impossible Love
Marvellous response Maria
I am sure you will enhance our forum.
I am sure you will enhance our forum.
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Re: Impossible Love
Welcome Maria.
Here are poets & poems you can learn from.
Michael (MV)