The Missionary

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Kenneth2816
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The Missionary

#1 Post by Kenneth2816 » 14 May 2019, 20:48

Resolute in the belief God loves all
(except Gays, Muslims, women who
have abortions, and ethnic minorities,)

he is consumed by a smoldering
fire to save you. He could be anywhere,
but he's at your door, handful

of tracts. God"s postman just
stopping by with this month's bill.

BobBradshaw
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Re: The Missionary

#2 Post by BobBradshaw » 14 May 2019, 21:00

Really like this....so well said in such a brief way....love those last 4 lines:

He could be anywhere,
but he's at your door, handful

of tracts. God"s postman just
stopping by with this month's bill.

Kenneth2816
Posts: 991
Joined: 01 Jun 2008, 09:17

Re: The Missionary

#3 Post by Kenneth2816 » 15 May 2019, 00:29

Dear Bob. I always thought they should do something useful like deliver the mail since they're coming by anyway. They are among us like fungus.

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